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how do i tell someone who was trying to introduce me to a happy candy land that i don't want to rot my mind as they have theirs
you run
how do you taste the white without feeling the rainbow ringing through your ears
you run
how do you know its the way you shouldn't let life go
when you are tasting colors feeling words and hearing flavors
run
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Drugs are bad never again

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:iconmusashi2476:
I really like the "tasting colors feeling words and hearing flavors" line. The imagery is perfect. Kind of reminds me of how E made me feel at times. I hear you on the drugs are bad thing. Had my run, no more thank you. Good poem anyway.

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:iconphotozz:
I agree. it's good to experiment, but you have more ahead of you than that. don't fuck it up.

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:iconvonakkenhoven:
fuck it all up, and you'll see what's left then is the real thing


lol
:iconchibi-bunny-usagi:
i'm all done with em!!

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:iconmusashi2476:
Good for you!

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:iconrose-hunter:
I've never taken them to begin with.

But I'm glad to hear you're not touching them anymore.

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:iconchibi-bunny-usagi:
yeah, it was bad. never again. i totally was drug into something without my knowledge or some shit like that i guess.

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:iconchibi-bunny-usagi:
i don't plan on it. i'm so done. i'm never even going to drink again.

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:iconalaskasnolaska:
I've got some baggage which will cause me to never touch a drink at all, for the rest of my life.

that poem sounded very frantic, lost and clueless to what's going on and twirling away into the unknown.

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